Omit The UNNECSSARY!

Instead of reading on and on about complete nonsense, wouldn't we rather want the author or even the speaker to get right to the point? In writing i think we love to ramble on with useless information so we can hit that 5 page mark, but it makes your paper boring and we need to know when words should be taken out! I know I am very bad with this. I will re read what I just wrote and be like I could summerize those three senteces to one! I was thinking this is just as important in writing your speech or talk. The most boring talks are when they ramble with useless words, when make it short and simple, but interesting it catches peoples attention fast! We should take this into consideration people... dont use more, it JUST BORES! haha (okay that was lame I just made that up) :)

Here are some examples found on www. Junkestudies.com

would like to assert that the author should be considered to be a buffoon.

The author is a buffoon.

It would be safe to say that Gregor Samsa is not the only character in Franz Kafka's The Metamorphosis to undergo drastic changes.

Gregor Samsa is not the only character in Franz Kafka's The Metamorphosis to undergo drastic change.

Before going to the supermarket, we made a list of the groceries we needed in order to make the food that we intended to eat for dinner.

Before going to the supermarket, we made a list of groceries that we needed to prepare dinner.