Sunday, April 26, 2009

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Monday, April 20, 2009

America the Hated?


In the story "America the Beautiful Dinesh D'Souza Shared a different perspective on America than the "average person" would perceive America. (Who even said America was a HER anyway?) I knew America was hated but i thought it was more of a jealous hate than and absolute hate for this country. I am so proud to be an American, we take each day we live for granite. Although it seems like life is getting crazy and Americans are getting too outta control ... we cant complain We have so much. Most importantly we have our freedom.
One thing that stood out the most was, D'Souza says on page 776 "that many believe that the Americans are divided people: NOT EVEN A NATION, but a collection of separate tribes!" This made me think. Does America stand for one? I do believe that we as Americans have our own voice our own choice and we do things in tribes , or "groups" maybe but when it comes to America, wheather we are fighting for our country or when something bad has happened we reunite and help one another out... AND stand for one. I guess I don't know as much as i should about other country's... Do they all stand as one? Because from what i know Other country's are fighting themselves? :/ hmmm? That is why America has so many Immigrants right? We are the COUNTRY everyone wants to live in?... I do! "America is the greatest, freest, and most decent society in existence" History is to be made and I am proud to be apart of it... AS AN AMERICAN! :)

Friday, April 17, 2009

WowwoweewOooOo....

can you believe it... SEMESTER COMPLETED. Well Almost.

It was a fun semester, and apologize for the all crazyness :) Good luck in the future to all!


Thursday, April 16, 2009

confusing comma YO!


Ahhh THE LITTLE HANGING DOT!!! The comma is among the most confusing and misused punctuation marks in English grammar. Some people place a comma whenever they pause in their proofreading. While this strategy is a good guide, it is not foolproof. Some guys have a vague recollection of grade-school grammar and guess at the comma’s proper placement. The problem here is that the rules get muddled over time. We see commas used incorrectly in print everyday, and for most of us, grammar school was a long time ago. Many folks seem to add commas whenever the mood strikes them, while others avoid commas entirely. For everyone who wants to overcome the comma, here are my 10 comma rules to remember.
1. Use commas to separate independent clauses when they are joined by one of the following words (known as coordinating conjunctions): and, but, for, or, nor, so, yet. For example: “She likes to read, and I like to write.” However, in the example “I like to run and swim,” no comma is needed because there is only one independent clause.
2. Use commas after introductory clauses, phrases, or words that come before the main clause. Don’t put a comma after the main clause when a dependent clause follows it (except for cases of extreme contrast, for example: They said they were not sleepy, although they fell asleep immediately).
3. Use commas to set off nonessential clauses, phrases, and words that occur in the middle of a sentence. Use one comma before the nonessential information to indicate the beginning of the pause and one at the end to indicate the end of the pause. To determine if the sentence element is essential, leave out the clause, phrase, or word, to see if the sentence still makes sense. If it does, then the element in question is nonessential and should be set off with commas. Here is an example of a nonessential clause: The girl, who happened to be a member of the club, was late for dinner.
4. Use commas to separate two or more coordinate adjectives that describe the same noun. Coordinate adjectives are adjectives with equal status in describing the noun. You can decide if two adjectives in a row are coordinate by asking the following questions: Does the sentence make sense if the adjectives are written in reverse order? Does the sentence make sense if the adjectives are written with and between them? If you answer “yes” to these questions, then the adjectives are coordinate and should be separated by a comma. Here are some examples of coordinate and non-coordinate adjectives: She was a difficult, stubborn child (coordinate). They lived in a white frame house (non-coordinate).
5. Use commas to separate three or more words, phrases, or clauses written in a series. For example: The child enjoys playing baseball, reading comic books, and watching television.
6. Use a comma prior to adding a quotation. The coach instructed his team, “You have the ability to win if you maintain your focus.”
7. Use a comma near the end of a sentence to separate contrasted coordinate (equal status) elements. For example: The girl said her favorite subject was history, not science.
8. Use commas to set off items in dates March 13, 1992, was the day we became best friends. (When using only the month and the year in a sentence, no comma is necessary. For example: My first trip to Florida in March 1992 is still vivid in my mind.)
9. Use commas to set off geographical names. For example: Charleston, South Carolina, is a city rich in history.
10. Use commas to avoid confusion. For example: Tell the doctor, pepper is one of your asthma triggers. Or better yet: Tell Christopher, Columbus discovered America.

Wednesday, March 25, 2009

RESEARCH QUESTION:

Q:What are the complications of gerd, and how is this problem is solved?



A: (in progress)I found alot of good info to start me off on these SOURCES:
http://www.medicinet.com/
http://www.healthcastle.com/
http://mayoclinic.com/health/gerd
www.emedicinehealth.com/reflux_disease_gerd/article_em.com
ABOUT.com/heatburn/GURD
American GastroenterologicalAssociation:P. John Simic, MD, FAAEM
and my UNCLE DR.TONYHALE<---- I have been e-mailing and schedualed tests for HIATAL HERNIA...bad case OF GERD! :( So I'll prob write in a Cause and Effect mode... and kind of use my life in my paper as an example? am i aloud to do that?

HOW TO... STEPS... 1, 2, 3, 4..... to write a good paper

CLICK ON THESE STEPS if your having a problem writing your paper! THEY HELP :)
1. CHOOSE A TOPICSTEP 2. FIND INFORMATIONSTEP 3. STATE YOUR THESISSTEP 4. MAKE A TENTATIVE OUTLINESTEP 5. ORGANIZE YOUR NOTESSTEP 6. WRITE YOUR FIRST DRAFTSTEP 7. REVISE YOUR OUTLINE AND DRAFT Checklist One Checklist TwoSTEP 8. TYPE FINAL PAPER

ALSO WE HAVE TO WRITE ANNOTATED BIBLIOGRAPHIE: what the heck!!! HAHA this MIGHT HELP OUT a lil bit ON EXCATLY WHAT IT IS!!!
An annotated bibliography is a list of citations to books, articles, and documents. Each citation is followed by a brief (usually about 150 words) descriptive and evaluative paragraph, the annotation. The purpose of the annotation is to inform the reader of the relevance, accuracy, and quality of the sources cited.

Creating an annotated bibliography calls for the application of a variety of intellectual skills: concise exposition, succinct analysis, and informed library research.
First, locate and record citations to books, periodicals, and documents that may contain useful information and ideas on your topic. Briefly examine and review the actual items. Then choose those works that provide a variety of perspectives on your topic.
Cite the book, article, or document using the appropriate style.

Here is a Sample i found... FOR A JOURNAL ARTICLE(ummm... Cornell University Library)
The following example uses the APA format for the journal citation. NOTE: APA requires double spacing within citations.
Waite, L. J., Goldschneider, F. K., & Witsberger, C. (1986). Nonfamily living and
the erosion of traditional family orientations among young adults. American Sociological Review, 51, 541-554.
The authors, researchers at the Rand Corporation and Brown University, use data from the National Longitudinal Surveys of Young Women and Young Men to test their hypothesis that nonfamily living by young adults alters their attitudes, values, plans, and expectations, moving them away from their belief in traditional sex roles. They find their hypothesis strongly supported in young females, while the effects were fewer in studies of young males. Increasing the time away from parents before marrying increased individualism, self-sufficiency, and changes in attitudes about families. In contrast, an earlier study by Williams cited below shows no significant gender differences in sex role attitudes as a result of nonfamily living

Tuesday, March 10, 2009

50 Q's on....

WHAT DO U WANNA KNOW ABOUT DEPRESSION!
NOTHING I NEED A NEEEW TOPIC






  1. what are the types of depression?


  2. can music cause depression?


  3. does depression make life more difficult?


  4. does depression affect the people around you?


does depression isolate you from others?

  1. does depression alternate your disicions?
  2. what group ethnicity have the highest rate of depression?
  3. can animals decrease the affects on depression?
  4. is there a difference between chronic pain and depression?
  5. is there a difference between being sad and being depressed?
  6. what are the 5 top movies that cause depression?
  7. what causes post-pardon depression?
  8. does the climate have an affect on being depressed?
  9. does television shows cause depression?
  10. can depression be diagnosed?
  11. does depression affect driving skills?
  12. is there a higher level of depression among females vs. male?
  13. what state has the highest level of depression?
  14. what part of the population has the highest level of depression?
  15. why is there such an increase in teen depression leading to suicide?
  16. who gets depression?
  17. how do you get over depression?
  18. what are some medications to control depression?
  19. what causes depression?
  20. what are the side affects of depression medications?
  21. who does depression affect most?
  22. can depression affect kids under ten?
  23. does depression on the rich or poor have different affects?
  24. does your weight affect depression different?
  25. why does stress add to depression?
  26. can certain foods cause depression?
  27. what is the difference between depression and the great depression?
  28. whats the signs before one gets depressed?
  29. can overly working cause depression?
  30. can your religion cause depression?
  31. what's the difference between short term and long term depression?
  32. what certain professions have the highest rate of depression?

  33. what's the difference between grief and depression?
  34. how does PMS relate to depression?

  35. what kind of research is on family depression?
  36. does exercises affect depression?

  37. is depression brought on by hereditary lifestyle?

  38. does counseling have a positive or negative affect on depression?

  39. what is the difference affects on childhood and adult depression?
  40. does depression make yo hair fall out?
  41. does depression make yo butt get big?
  42. do you crave certain foods when depressed?
  43. why depression is a trade of personality of robbery?
  44. can depression affect a pregnant woman's baby?

    50.WHAT IS THE TRUE Definition on depression?